This Isn't Going As Planned.

But, I knew that would happen. So, let me tell you what I want? Would that help? lol. First off let me say I'm not going to be bothered by any thing you could EVER say. Because I am my own worst critic, and whatever negative comment you could throw my way, my mind has already done, and ten times worse at that. So, when you read, whatever you choose to read think of these questions...
1). Did it make complete sense?
--if there were places you were lost...I would like to know. I'll fix them.
2). Was anything repetitive?
--some things are meant to be, but if it bothered you, I can fix that too.
3). What was the worst about it?
--it could have been a paragraph, a word, a sentence, a phrase. doesn't matter. If it bothered you, chances are it bothered someone else.
4). What was the best part?
--Just because I'd like to know what turns people on. lol. it'll help me in the future.
5). What could be expanded on?
--if there is something you'd like more details on, so would someone else 9 out of 10 times.
6). What could be downsized?
--Am I rambling too much here or there?

Questions like that. It'll help me. I love to know that people are reading my stuff for pure enjoyment, but to be honest, I started this blog for help. Read for your pleasure, but if you like it that much, help me write again. ;) A 2nd grader should be able to read it and understand it. Maybe not so much the vocabulary or wording, but the general idea of every story a youngster should be able to understand. Anything to do with my family, that's my main focus right now. For my autobiography that's due in 2 weeks. So if I have a ** in the title, please read. PLEASE tell me something about it. But, thanks to everyone who has read anything, commenting or not. I'm glad to know that I'm worth your time.

Thank you very much,
The struggling writer.